Returning to the Horror Flash Fiction Book.
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Going to try and do one a day in this style until all the drawings are done.
The Last Pimple
Story here.
Moonlight Hitcher
19 May, 2008
Beach weather is back. Bikinis under tank tops and shorts. The flapping of flip-flops everywhere.
This morning it felt like a holiday. The fellas at the Douglas & Rosecrans SBUX commented on it, too. Light traffic this AM until about 9:30.
A man was rooting through the shelves of merchandise and managed to upset a large glass coffee pot--it was empty, but on its way down it collided with his cup of coffee and both exploded on the tile floor. Good stuff. The manager (depicted here last Tuesday toting a bag of beans) was right on it.
No other casualties to report. (And yes, I finagled the fingers in Photoshop.)
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3 comments:
The torso is really nicely done, but I think that we shouldn't be able to see so much of her forearm.
Love the face, too.
A good point. I was trying to push the smallness of the ribcage and the exaggerated self-love of wrapping your own arm that far around your body. I wanted it to look unnatural, but maybe I went too far.
Going too far is a good thing!
I hadn’t noticed it until I read the part about fiddling with the fingers. As far as exaggeration goes, it’s just fine. I know that you look for critique and not just slavish admiration of your remarkable talent (which is my natural state when looking at your drawings). So I scrutinize your drawings for things that I think you would like to have pointed out to you.
Also, it’s exactly the sort of thing I do in drawings all the time, so I’m trying to reinforce my ability to see that sort of thing in my own drawings.
BTW, I love the hair on the woman in the post after this one… really nicely done.
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